I’ve gotten comments back from my first thesis reader. Uh oh! Apparently my writing is more “entertaining” than “academic”… which comes as no surprise. I have 15 days to make revisions – major ones, including changing my thesis statement! – and try again to see if I am able to defend this semester. Fingers crossed, please!
Oh yeah, and the pageant is THIS WEEKEND!!!
THe comments are appropos – thesis shouldlook back to determine hertofore unknown or overlooked causality and apply same to predicting future outcomes.
this thing drives me nuts!!! bd